i liked it...fuck that!!!...I LOVED this poem...

it showed a teen as a rebelious image where he/she jus does wat he/she wants that finally relizes tha truth in tha end...

as i read tha poem, i was angry at tha angry points and sorrow at tha sorrow points, that is a sure sign of a good poem...

as for tech's, nice rhyme scheme, flowed well,

I take it all back, I don't want my rights.
Give me a chance, I'll listen, I'll try!
Whatever you do
PLEASE DON'T LET ME DIE!

^best stanza^

overall, nice job...

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