Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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this piece was great i liked it, it was easy to read, not the greatest vocab but that didnt really effect this piece all that much
the idea is well used but i found this piece made me sit and think about parts of it that i never really payed much attention to before
i actually can remember thinking about some of the stupids things that you mentioned in here. but the one part that struck home the hardest was the lines
I'll have sex without worry
of disease or a child!
i must admit that there was a time that i actually thought that but after having Nyla, the way i thought changed alot, about alot of different things
my love
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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