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Old 09-07-03, 05:33 PM   #4
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i liked this a lot, it approached a topic wit a deeper sense than most people even think about it as, as for a poem, the A-B-A-B rhyme scheme was there but did not take away from poem in any way, u choose words that worked wit tha poem as well as tha rhymes...a real nice piece...
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