well honestly ma nig...though its long..it doesnt mean that it'll keep a nig attached....you really lacked wordplay...n your vocab was aiight....if you had iller structure to this...you coulda done somethin...but you lacked to keep the readers interest....

read it over n see what you can make of it...

igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S