Thread: be yourself
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Old 09-07-03, 11:51 PM   #4
Pugilist
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i liked what you were saying in that drop, some positivity in this day and age is always good to read.

this line stuck out for me:

'im expressing what im feeling so just dont get caught in your mind/
dont fall now after all that you have climbed and all of yourself you designed/'

good rhymes, but the structure could be better, it just makes for a more consistent flow.
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