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Old 09-08-03, 08:07 AM   #13
sal-v
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"you couldnt beat me if you was memphis bleek" ..?

How the ..

.. What the fuck?

What the fuck is that supposed to mean ...

This was weak .. Develop your own flow, you had one portion in here that I was actually vibing to .. In the second verse ... It went:

"You told me not to estimate ya .. nobody's greater"

That snippet ...

Overall .. This was ... Ehh .. Decent at best

You need to learn how to record better .. You have to use HEadphones .. You have potential to have amazing quality ..

Let's see if you can actually make a song, though ...

Looks like you killed the kid in the battle, but you didnt win my ears, yet ...

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