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Old 09-08-03, 08:28 AM   #27
sal-v
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it wouldnt even say his accent, guys ..

his vocals just aint high enough, and your adlibs are way too loud, buddy .. there just as loud as the regular vocal track, they should be 1/2 at max ...

put a tad bit more emotion into this .. felt the song in and out, though .. you just need work on a few things .. i see alot of potential ...

well worth listening ... by the way ... what beat is that? who made it? that shit is illllll as fuck ..

stay up kid, if you got a chance peep this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78269

shit was well worth listening to ..

stay up1
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