lmao sorry bounce but hahahahahahahaha.

the beat was pretty tight. your styles are scary dawg. you guys arent on beat or anything lol. im not feelin this style. it doesnt really show skill. u should use your regular voice too. if you want to have a dark sound express it through the lyrics. you gotta work out that newbie flow. i dont really hear any hiphop influnces showing through your song. maybe some insane clown posse or somethin. good luck on the next one dawg

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