no if you were goin for the ICP kinda stuff then u nailed it. i couldnt comment on this type of music cus i don't like this style at all. i like more classic hip hop. but your flow and style does reflect the genre. and yes i could hear your drunkeness lol. your vocab is all there. i wouldnt expect subpar vocab from you. sorry, this kinda stuff just isnt my cup of tea

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