Deadly, your verse wsa ok. ryme scheme was bad tho.
you had some punches that could have been worded
better to..

Numb your words, your spitten weeds when I got venemous verbs, all those wins from herbs?/

that was your Best Line..

-----------------

Brooklyn, your verse hadda Good ryme scheme..a tiny bit choppy.
but Nice punches and Pretty good flow...
punches, w-play,...blah..

Vote...BROOKLYN

FUCK SLEEPERS
THESE BATTLES HAVE BEEN UP FOR 2 WEEKS. POLL VOTES ARE NEEDED!

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=77500
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=77358