Broken Dreams - the drums is alright, but the sounds u used could be improved . the plink plonk throughout the melody is shit though.

That's life - Drum sounds still suck but the melody was better. Still basic n slow flowin though.

try addin an extra kicks in between the main kick n the snare now n then to make it bounce a bit. also, unless the main instrument/sample u use for the melody is extremely dope then add more elements to give the track a larger sound.

basically u need to collect better sounds n go from there. keep at it yo.

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