A short burst of reality. In a quite poetic form. The grit being underneath the almost smooth and flowing surface (i.e. how you described it).

Some might say expand it. And maybe they're are right. But it could just be one of those pieces. As said before, a short burst of one's reality. I enjoy reading those types. Don't expand on it, don't make it longer, if you don't want to. Do what you feel is right. If you felt this was how you wanted it, then so be it.

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