I appreciated this piece. Quite a few in here will. Especially maybe content. Who's always bitching about this! (And we wouldn't have him any other way)..

But yeah, i saw your little breakdown. Of how you got the flow in an abstract way. That takes me back (to when i didn't write crap). So i most definetly feel that part of the piece. I didn't recognise it at first.

Overall a solid piece of what it was (er, or is). Your emotions held behind the abstract (at times off) structure and what not. Bursting...

This place has become a bit of a haven for the 'abstract' and 'different' writers. Hmmm....rasta shack is turning more 'llectual...(!)...

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