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Old 09-08-03, 07:24 PM   #1
Carmen
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Talking This is my first time so...

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... I thought I'd share this battle rhyme I came up with moments earlier. It's not directed to anybody here so don't get defensive.

Why you testing my aim? I'll put a paint ball in your eye socket
Why you testing my game? I'll shoot a eight ball in your side pocket
I intentionally approach you the wrong way to get on your bad side
Toy around with your nerve endings and sit on your mad vibe
I create bars assembly line style like Hershey's factories
Radioactivate your blood stream like acid from batteries
Lock on your target like radar a sandstorm's in your forecast
Then pull a three sixty and transform in a cold flash
Fuck it! I got multies yeah but I'm more versatile
Wait, hold up! It's time for me to switch my style
If you have any room "in those genes" for a "genuine" rhyme trait
Then I'll plant a seed and just maybe you can get your rhyme str8
I'm "disturbing" sick sentences with "ludacris" expression
"the peace" is no where to be found I lash out w/ aggression
I'll have you "crazy in love" but "baby boy" you don't move me
This here the real "Carmen" "beyonce" just played 1 in a movie
And that's "lyrically spoken" like a genius I'll "fracture" your whole structure
It's easy to be "never scared" when you carry weight like "bone crusher"
I don't have to say more I knocked you out with this last bar
Fuck around with me again and get your head smashed hard...
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