| Sharp Perfection. 
				 
				
				
				| From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin | 
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 iight
 as said before it was kinda hard to get into at the beginning, but i found the farther i read the farther i got into it
 
 first i thought this was going to be another of those try to escape from the spirit of death again, regreting all the stuff you did, kinda piece, but it did have some unsuspected twists in there
 
 could work on the flow and vocab a bit, tweak it up a notch or two and then i think i would really shine
 
 my love
 
 ~Tera~
 DONT HATE
 
				__________________ R.I.P to my lost girl~ Nyla ~
 keep singing in heaven
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