Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
|
IP:
iight
as said before it was kinda hard to get into at the beginning, but i found the farther i read the farther i got into it
first i thought this was going to be another of those try to escape from the spirit of death again, regreting all the stuff you did, kinda piece, but it did have some unsuspected twists in there
could work on the flow and vocab a bit, tweak it up a notch or two and then i think i would really shine
my love
~Tera~
DONT HATE
__________________
R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
|