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Old 09-08-03, 08:13 PM   #3
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From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin
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iight

as said before it was kinda hard to get into at the beginning, but i found the farther i read the farther i got into it

first i thought this was going to be another of those try to escape from the spirit of death again, regreting all the stuff you did, kinda piece, but it did have some unsuspected twists in there

could work on the flow and vocab a bit, tweak it up a notch or two and then i think i would really shine

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~Tera~
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