what up man, this shit was aight man, didn't really have that much flow, and it was pretty long, but yo I understand that... when dealin with shit like that you just want to keep on writing and all... lol... alot of the rhyme scheme and wordplay was mad simple, but most times when cats pouring out emotions they don't give that much consideration... it's cool though...

I remember when I wrote something just like this... here go the link...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=37191
you ain't got to reply on it or nothing... just read it if you got time... it's got alot in common with what you wrote here...

Peace