^bet he took alot of thought and time to reply^

iight

this here was nice, kinda like a lulaby, which is good.

sometimes it seemed like the words were only put in to ryme no other purpose, they didnt really fit it all that well, but it got better as it went on, didnt notice it so much

i felt emotion, and my eyes were never drifting off of this, and thinking about something else, kept my attention!

vocab wasnt all that great, could be upped a bit, but im glad you didnt just throw in a whole bunch of huge words that you dont even know what they mean.

flow started off sorta weak then worked its way up

like The Necromancer said Three holes, damn. I can only imagine what three holes might do to a person. but you helped me imagine it

my love

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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