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Old 09-09-03, 12:01 PM   #3
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From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin
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iight

not much to really say about it, there wasnt all that many faulters, but i didnt really feel it all that much, might just be me, but i didnt see anything, feel anything, just saw words.

your vocab is good so was your flow, those dont need to be touched again at all they were fine

it reminded me some what of one i once wrote, cause of the whole cirlce thing, how it started to same ended the same, even thou the middles were different ahwell

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