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Old 09-09-03, 12:10 PM   #14
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From: Where ever competion may be
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ight, i cant vote for the poles but I'll vote in text

Illynice lacked wordplays and a creativity

started off weak and monotonous
but got better along the way

basic punchlines there

Focus'd

Dont take this anyway mayn but too me the flow was a bit off in some parts

nevertheless, he straight killed it

nice creativity, and nice punches

Your verses is shorter than a black mans life in a horror movie/ (lol)

You don't go to war you protest/ (could have reworded it better, but it had me laughing a bit)

Vote = Focus'd