Aight.

Borns Lyrics Never Seem To Fit So Ill Classify Them As Co~Text (Kotex...Girl Pad)
Gonna Be Your 3rd Loss Against Me Im Thinking Born Has A Hex

good punch, but the Ryme scheme at the end
could have been better.
Seemed like you always had a Good first line to a Punch,
then the Follow up would be Kinda Weak. In my Opinion.
Your Wordplay was Aight. Iv'e Heard alot of this shit B-4
you juss worded it Differently. (size's of Shoe, Left Breathless..
blah)..
Over-all, this was an Ok Verse..

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Born to Kill...
your verse had More Multies and it flowed a little better.
but your ryme scheme could have used work too...
this was a Very hard battle to vote on....


VOCAB-B2K
WORDPLAY-ENVY
PUNCHES-ENVY
PERSONALS-ENVY..that 50% shit
MULTIES-B2K
LAUGHS-B2K

VOTE-ENVY...
cant POLL vote, but i aint a NEWB...


FuCk SlEePErS…4-0 BaTtLe…..pOlL VoTe’s nEeDeD…

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