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Old 09-09-03, 04:01 PM   #25
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DAMN BILLY & BONDAGE VOTES WAS CRAP SO HERES A NICE BREAKDOWN. . .

ICEBERG:
  • 20% FILLER
  • BETTER PERSONALS
  • NICE WORDPLAY
  • BARELY ANY PUNCHES
  • GOOD STRUCTURE
  • GOOD FLOW
OVERALL: 7/10

AVALON: 14% FILLER
  • BEGINNING FLOW WAS OFF
  • NICE PUNCHES. . .1 I DON'T MIND QUOTING. . .
    [The title’s mine... I merk... & I’m coppin’ it now
    Cos ya’ body’s fully hidden in a trash can like Oscar the Grouch...]
  • NO PERSONALS
  • MOSTLY BLAH. . .<---AS TO WHAT CAMERAC WOULD SAY
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NOT WWHAT I EXPECTED FROM YOU!
OVERALL: 5.9/10

VOTE:ICEBERG

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