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Old 09-09-03, 07:45 PM   #19
brainsurgeon
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i alot of shock's verse was filler multi's and rarely hit.. the drool to a star bit was tight.. but apart from that you had few stand outs..

j.dubya had flow problems in bits but basically he just play out punched you

personals: j.dubya
rhyme scheme & structure: j. dubya
flow: j.dubya
multi's: shock
vocab: shock
wordplay: tied
complexity: --
metaphors: jdubya
punches: j.dubya
opener: j
closer: j

vote = j