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Old 09-09-03, 07:57 PM   #11
Passivist
Hail the Undergods
 
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This was an aight peace. This suffered from a REALLY important flaw. Since it did not rhyme as much, it messed up the pice. I liked the ocncpet just that the lack of flow threw me off. Anyway this was an iight pice

7/10

return the favor on my piece Outlaw
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