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Originally posted by Bash
This piece was aight for a newbie , but u have alot of elevating to do.........Ur lyrics are simple , u need to up ur vocabulary , Ur content was good , but kinda weak , ur wordplay was really Weak , U need to elevate on that......Ur multies were also whack , also elevate on that.............I only got one thing to tell you.........ELEVATE........................
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he said it. Return the favor on my piece Outlaw |