Nice piece dawg , people are sleeping on this because it's kinda long , but I'm telling u people , this piece is worth reading , Anyways dawg your ability too spit some hard lyrics shined in this piece , First of all ur wordplay was kinda weak.....Content was Tight......Ur multies were Tight.....But you fell off in some parts.......For example.......

now what I can do is straight up kill you//
come up in your crib let my niggas drill you//
you may have thought I was optimist, but that's in the past//
you on the ground gettin roughed by someone who's changed fast//

^^^^^^That was whack right there.........But you made up for it in the other 3 lines................The only thing u need too elevate on , has to be ur VOCABULARY...........Just elevate on that , and u will get better.................Overall u get a 7.9/10..............Check ur P-M , because I sent u a message