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Old 09-09-03, 09:16 PM   #12
DaGyrlRemarqabL
..A New Breed of Femcee..
 
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Niiiiiiice piece here, Content..I really liked the way you did this, incorporating your name into the verse many times with multiple meanings..Very creative...Also nice imagery and emotion in this, i could really feel what you were saying, especially the part about the sunday drive, that really stood out to me for some reason..This was very creatively done, with a nice choice of words to really accentuate the whole vibe of the piece. Nice writez fella. Stay up and keep elevatin.
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