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Old 09-09-03, 10:32 PM   #13
redragon
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Omg....man i mean Omg
That was some deep shit,for real
Seemed rather poetic,
Eviley: your smile was pure illusion
Bash: When I looked at you , It was one of my best Visions
^^Fav lines^^
Well you guys stayed on topic flow was there,you want to help improve?Well here ya go,
improve on,
-multis
-metties
-wordplay
^^Learn^^
Vocab wasen't needed in this type of a piece,as a matter of fact you don't need vocab at all,just use it to make yourself not look dumb,stay up guys
One love
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