wow. well, theres a lot of anger there.

your wordplay was kinda basic, and most of the punches were just lashing out instead of clowning him to death.
you had a cool flow, it didn't really fall off in any places.
I like the chorus.
your closing line in the verse didn't rhyme with anything...were you in that much of a rush?

this was a basic piece, with some okay disses. Up your wordplay and you'll have some dope shit dude.
Nothin quotable here though.

Peace

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