Yeah, that was nice. A gust of fresh air, sorta reminded me a KRS-ONE. Sounded like it would be nice in audio, too. Sweet multi-rhymes with meaning AND flow. Maybe could have less simple-er
rhymes with more consistent syllable similarity,but thats askin alot. This's my 1st post and 1st rhyme i read and it's givin me good expectations. Full-Props to Slik.

Peace