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Keystyle on real life events~~~peep~from da heart
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09-10-03, 01:28 AM
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Mr.Christensen
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wow... i liked it alot
your imagery was good and i definetly saw what you saw through your eyes
i like the ending alot 2
few changes i would make if i were you..
add just a little more vocab to it..
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