But where he says "all rules" in the first post...

Maybe you didn't know...

But that usually means...

No feeding
No flipping
No hate votes
No crew votes
No dick ridin

So, there ya go...

Anyway...
Back to the battle...

Aside from the flipping, this was ok.

I loved the opening line Gimmick came with, spooky like.

Pale, ya had nothing too original but nothing too shitty either.

Alot of filler though.
Try and make each line a diss.
Especially in a short battle.
You don't have time for build up lines like...
"Dang, Gimmick this is really gonna suck"
And
"Battling you, son, I have no objection"
And
"Your sitting in your chair wondering what will he say next"
And
"Alright there Gimick, I am bringing this to a close"

See, no punches in those...
If ya check Gimmick's verse...
He hit ya with almost every single line.

There ya go, man.

Just hit more often and you'll get better.

Peace

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