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Old 09-10-03, 05:13 PM   #4
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pretty simple...
it flowed ok I guess...
rhyme scheme was aight...
But yo, I was really feeling the structure of it, that whole looking back a the photo thing... feeling that man...
This could've been better no doubt, but it was aight...

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