Yo, I liked all this:
"I could spit another verse about how girls can be bitches,
Or I could make it even worse and rap about havin riches//
I could go on for a page about hangin with thugs,
And how I'm rappin and cappin, dappin with handfulls of drugs//
But that shit is played out like basketball up at the ruckers,
And furthermore I want to sound different then all of you fuckers//"
The rest... wasn't feeling it too much...
Got to admit, you came strong with it at first... but then kinda fell off at the half...
The first half had a nice flow and a good messege...
Dawg you could have kept this going... with that same lil formula as the first have... shit would have been way better...
Instead of kinda being cut-off, like if you gave it up and shit... lol...

Peace