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Old 09-10-03, 09:03 PM   #5
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uumm wut can i say....up your vocab...elavate some..it as a good drop but you cud'a made it longer an more topical...maybe have a hook..but all in all for a newbie...you did good keep droppin dawg..u got potential next time...read over..an drop summin wit flames...peace man
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