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Old 09-11-03, 12:34 AM   #5
Mr.Christensen
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
 
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keep your homies on call, cus when i brawl, in that next level
every outsider, wets ther drawls, so just snap your pencil

loved that line..
like those above me say.. this wa a good drop.. i found the flow, the rhyme scheme was simple yet effective. I suggest try and get like 1 more rhyme per bar in... an internal rhyme scheme would make this off the hook... it could have been a great battle if you worked in a few more punches... the vocab and its use was good 2...

stay up
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