You Write Pretty Well...Gotta Shorten Those Bars But Man To Get Better Flow And Also Get Some Multies In There...The Writing Seems A Bit Unspittable...Get A Bit More Hip-Hop In There...Sounded A Bit More Poetic But If That Was Your Aim..Its Good...It Aint Bad..Just Keep Workin At It Mun...Pz...

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