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Old 09-11-03, 09:52 AM   #10
tsheff112
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Yeah pretty much what they said. I was starting to get the feel for the concept, but lack of flow put that to an end. Ok on the vocab, and if this was originally a poetic drop, then good shot, but if it was supposed to be a flow, then just add some more flow, stir that shit up and drop again. Pretty good drop.

Laaate.
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