Yeah, um... Basic rhyme scheme, simple flow, and a bit cloudy as to what the concept really is. Sort of wanders like a Cash Money song, minus all the bullshit about platinum and benzes or whatever. And at the end you said "so as I go into the hook" so where's the hook? Is this the finished product? I know you can come better than this, but keep droppin and you'll get better as you progress.

Laaate.