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Old 09-11-03, 10:57 AM   #1
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What is Life

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Hey guys, I think that this is probably my first TRUE poem, drop links, feedback, critiscism, and tell me what YOU think it's about, I'll PM you all with the actual answer, but I'm just curious as to see what you all think


What is life is the question I always ask
Without you it's nothing to me, I wished
I hoped, I dreamed for it to last
Friends, was what we were always until
My feeling shone true, for you,
they'll always be there too
Life is nothing without your sense of being
Without knowing that emotions exchanged,
they aren't in vein, love not wasted today
Heart torn apart re-sealed from lovers past
I promised I wouldn't hurt you, but you broke me
Like I was glass, I'm mad, no depressed
All these tears I shed, your the reason that I have wept
Life is nothing without you to be their right beside me
But you ignore me, destroy me, two words and it's like
my entire life you just ignored me
"We're not" is all it takes, and I forgot how I laid my head on you
Even if it is no longer there, my emotions will show for you
Cause I Love You
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