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Hahaha, Just Seen This One. .
Not a bad job my man, flow was as downpacked as it gets, a few good quoteable lines in this piece, the blocks / tetris seems to of caught their attention but i liked this one more:
Reached into my jacket and capped the teacher in her face
She put me on front seat, now I put her in her place
^ lol, i just thought that was worded nicely, rolled off the tongue pretty well and gave me a slight chuckle, also the 'kemotherapy' line caught my eye as i read it. = )
All in all a decent piece, flow and subtle wordplay were its strong points, could of used more multi's and internals in there to strengthen it a little more, but im just being picky, i really liked this actually, made for a good read, short and straight to the point.
Props. = )
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