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Old 09-11-03, 04:19 PM   #10
1STLAYDEE
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Knowledge is free, my bullets got college degrees...

That line has to go. Sometimes adding words to the end of a rhyme just so it flows can make you lose your audience attention.
Cause when I first read it I was like okay. Then you completely jumped ship and started talking about the black man has wisdom.

Nice rhyme though..
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