iight

you gotta wait a little while for some replys k, and reply to other ones to, then ppl will reply to yours

about the piece, it really did show that when you do write something you put alot into it. it was a good piece

sometimes i did lose myself in the flow, it turned out to be more of just a slow read spoken thing, cause the lines were so long.

but you had so much emotion in it so much effort and so much truth, although this is getting to be a topic thats written about, it was still a good read, and you represtented it in a way i havent seen done before, comparing it with the white rose and all

the line that stood out to me was:

Kissing me deeply, engulfed within a fierce and forceful passion, aiding me in my silent struggle

my love

~Tera~
DONT HATE

BTW thats such a strong picture i looked at it in thought for like 5 minutes

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