heres how i see it...

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subliminal thoughts............ stop sendin' em,
women are caught..............hock venom,

adrenalin shots...........penicillins could not
illin' to stop.............. amoxacillin's just not,
real enough
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its basically a structure that rhmes every word at the begining and end of every line.

this structure better discribes my "nature" piece.

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Between mountain peaks, where blue pristine creeks
Weave below a sea, of spruce green trees
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structure goes..

between..................peaks................blue pristine creeks
weave......................sea...................s pruce green tree's

kinda get what im getting at?



ps. cool sig varentao

peace