Mental Stamina Is Going On The Moron List. .

Not a bad piece folks, as i read it i thought it flowed pretty nicely, Avalon's opening verse seemed to have the better flow because of his multi's, the topic was kinda a let down i felt, you guys have so much potential yet picked one of the most played concepts ever to write on, lol. Knight's verses were ok, lacked internals i guess, more multi's would of helped tighten it, but he kept to the topic. You basically did all you could with this, the topic was played as hell, didnt seem like neither of you tried too hard cause ive seen you both write better.

Get a decent topic and write to that, it'll be 10 times doper than this piece, i promise.

Eace-Pay!

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