Nice drop profit, simple yet coplex, vocab was on point, nice imagery and the flow was all there. Very good work, please keep them comming, you have much talent.

my favorite line:

and with a sigh i breathe new life into the soul of another
even in death i remain truly your brother

I can realy relate to your message...Just like calisto I too can see some frustration and or angery put into this piece, making it a personel one...

Much respect

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