This was awesome. The wordplay was great, the message, execution, flow was all perfect. The opening really set the stage, I loved it..

the crash of the tidal wave rages and sounds madly
i surface in the resurgance and take breath gladly
sadly the time is over and death is near
i pause for insight and to wipe a tear
bloodshed and racism race away from my mental
hard to believe near the end life is so simple

I like the life is so simple line here especially, because it is. People make it complicated, but when near death, when all that matters is life or the soon to be absence of it, it becomes simple again.
And I wonder if we really are granted all the cosmical answers in that moment before death? I truly hope so lol Without that insight Ill be sitting in the afterworld still driven crazy by questions.

and with a sigh i breathe new life into the soul of another
even in death i remain truly your brother

This is beautifully written.
Really nice piece profiit. Kudos~

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