Is Terror Just Another Word, Found In A Book..
Leaving Shook, A Thought Or Maybe a Look?..
^Nice, especially the "terror" line... that's a common word in this time and day.

When The Two Towers Fell So Did My Heart..
Undying Starts, All From Families Ripped Apart..
^The first line again was good, i felt it, think ya should've changed "two" to "twin" though... i dunno, just my 2 cents.

Husbands and Wives Lost, Children Left Chained..
Nothing Gained, Insecure Instances Bring On Pain..
^Again, like the first line, deep, makes sense and it's so true.

No Reasoning Behind Them, Never Turn Your Back..
Leaving Minds Packed, All From Emotions Lacked..
^Both lines good, hate is the reason behim them... very deep again.

Children Left Weary, Families Torn And Dreary..
Leaving Friends Varied, Fear The, Or Queried..
^Nice first line again... i didn't understand your second line though, and yes i know what a query is.

To All Of The Victims And Families, Draw Near..
Look Into The Mirror, In The Past, In My Prayers..
^Both lines nice, all around, very deep again, coming from your heart.

All in all, nice drop, very heartfelt and deep... how i broke it down... you had nice set up lines... but i wasn't feelin the second lines...

Overall=8/10

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