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Old 09-12-03, 06:58 AM   #11
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Originally posted by XL4REAL
Fo a start these 1st two lines dont rhyme very well if atall....

everything I "write's hot" like I'm a pyro holdin' lighterz-to-felt-tips//
I'ma "smoke" this nigga...watch this "iceberg-get-melted"//(Iceberg420 get it)

dog you ain't "real"...like a telletubbie you "soft-and-pretend"//
you must have "asked to be merked" too many timez cause you got more lossez-than-winz//

So iceberg gets my vote.....

Go vote on my battle with shepney zaney.......


ummm...can you read?????? Honestly though...how do they not rhyme?????? Have you ever heard of a thing called a multi...hence the "-" thingz" showing all the rhyming wordz...
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