^ Dont Up This Piece That many Times Again, Simply Reply To Other Peoples And Ask Them To Reply To Yours. J-Dubya - Your Going On The Moron List. .


Ok, onto the piece, the flow was a little hard to catch as i read this, the bars were too long and without many internals and multi's, i struggled to catch on to the flow of this. Content wise i thought this was decent, i liked how you spelt out what R.U.L.E stood for, i actually was feeling the second verse the most from this piece, it seemed to connect more with the title than the opening verse did, the hook was decent, although, i dont see the point writing a hook unless its for an future audio. Basically, shorten your bars a little, add more internals and multi's, you should have a problem with creativity, try to make your pieces a little more original, write something that will hold the readers attention, not just generic stuff.

In a word: Elevate.
The potentials there but you have a long way to go my man.

Eace-Pay!

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