Yeah good shit here, with a dark feel to it. Good flow and nice vocab. Good entry line. Could have had a harder closer, but that was good for this type of pices. Keep that fire and use it to drop more... Good piece.
Check out my open mics, "She's gone now" and "Off the top."
If you get the time, hit up this battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77400